[REVISED] A FUTURE PROFESSIONAL AUDITOR

I think Erica Dwi Putri would make a professional auditor.

In the chart below, write three reasons why you think so and some supporting points for each.

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Main Idea

Smart and detail-oriented person. A hard-worker. Good team player.

Supporting points

  • Smart in accounting.
  • Likes to plan her activities.
  • She gives full attention to the detail
  • Good time management.

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  • She makes her goals.
  • She always passionate in everything she does.
  • Self-motivated person.
  • She doesn’t give up easily.
  • Able to lead a team.
  • She open to all people in the team.
  • Problem-solving thinking.
  • She supports all people in the team.

Now write a short introductory paragraph, like the first paragraph in part 6.

Have been working together in the same organization, I can say that Erica Dwi Putri is a smart girl who pays high attention to everything she does. She also a hard worker and a good team player. Based on this opinion, I think Erica would make a professional auditor in the future.

Write a topic sentence for each of your main ideas.

  1. She is very smart in accounting and pays high attention to the details.
  2. She is a hard-worker.
  3. She is a good team player.

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A FUTURE PROFESSIONAL AUDITOR

Have been working together in the same organization, I can say that Erica Dwi Putri is a smart girl who pays high attention to everything she does. She also a hard worker and a good team player. Based on this opinion, I think Erica would make a professional auditor in the future.

First, she is very smart in accounting and pays high attention to the details. Since senior high school, Erica has taken an interest in accounting. She has joined severals Accounting competition that challenge and enrich her knowledge in accounting. In everything she does, she always pays attention to the details. She always writes some notes about the activities that she has to do. Just like a rundown. That’s why she never missed any deadlines because through the notes that she made, she can distribute her time accordingly. Before submitting her works, she always does double-check. Make sure that her works are perfectly presented her answers. I think she would make a competent and professional auditor because of these qualities.

Second, she is a hard-worker. Once she sets her goal, she always tries her best to accomplish the goals. That’s why she looks so passionate in any tasks she does. She’s also a self-motivated person. She believes in herself, that she can attain the goal she made. When the problem comes, she doesn’t give up easily. In the life as an auditor, there must be a time where we would feel burned out because of some deadlines and findings. With these qualities of her, I believe she would survive as an auditor.

The last but not least, she is a good team player. She knows how to lead a team and create an effective team. With her openness to others about her thoughts and goals, it makes other people easy to follow her lead and directions. And she’s also the type of leader who always respects and supports her fellow to give their best efforts and always appreciates them when they did a good job. When a problem comes in the team, she encourages her fellow to think together for the way-out and acts as the problem solver. Sometimes when doing the audit, we need to build a team to make the work easier and faster to be done. I think an effective team should have an ‘encourager’ member or leader. And with Erica’s personality, I think she will be the ‘encourager’ in the team.

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